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完整的雅思作文寫作步驟介紹

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在雅思寫作考試中,要在規定的時間內完成所有的寫作,對考生來說一定要規劃好自己寫作的每一步。接下來小編爲大家介紹一下雅思寫作的幾個步驟,包括從框架搭建到內容填充方面,我們都需要注意什麼?我們一起來學習一下。

完整的雅思作文寫作步驟介紹

完整的雅思作文寫作步驟介紹

雅思寫作步驟之一:框架構建

雅思寫作考試主要體型分類爲:IDO模式(introduction discussion opinion即引入觀點,正反論證和提出結論),PES模式(phenomenon explanation solutions 即現象描述,解釋說明和問題解決)和issue模式(to what extant do you agree or disagree)。

所以考生在考試前有必要把每個模塊的表達句型準備好,最好形成自己的模塊,只要考到該考點都用相應的模式去寫作,這是第一步。

下面以最常考的issue爲例給大家一個範本,以有保留的肯定作爲基本立場,在此僅供各位做一個基本的參考:

I agree with the speaker’s broad assertion that…. However, the speaker unnecessarily extends this broad assertion to embrace…. My points of contention with the speaker involve…, as discussed below.

I concede that the speaker is on the correct philosophical side of this issue. After all, ….

While…, at the same time we should be circumspect about…. After all,….

The speaker’s assertion is troubling in two other respects as well. First, …. Secondly… . For instance…

In sum, the speaker’s assertion that… begs the question, because…. As for the broader assertion, I agree that…. Nevertheless, …. In the final analysis, given … we are forced to strike a balance in how we ….

當然,這裏只是給大家一個例子,究竟如何總結這個框架,和考生平時閱讀是分不開的。可以從美文的範文或者官方給出的樣文中自己提煉出屬於自己的框架,但最重要的是要在平時針對不同的考試題目來反覆熟練的使用這個模塊,才能保證自己在考場上能夠熟悉自如地使用這個寫作思路。

雅思寫作步驟之二:內容填實

如何填實中間段落的內容,主要從兩個方面入手,一個是要掌握常見題目的觀點以及論據,另一個是要掌握常見的論證手段。下面分別做簡單介紹。

常見觀點的準備是非常重要的,一定要針對雅思考試常考查的話題做考前總結,做到熟悉話題,針對話題能夠提出相應的觀點,並且能自如的用英語表達相關的觀點和例子。常見的考試話題範圍做如下總結和歸納,希望考生考前做好應對準備:animal experiments; censorship; compete or play; youth drug abuse; e-book or p-book; female juvenile crime; intelligent machines replacement; mandatory retirement age; overweight; corporal punishments; littering problems; evaluate and criticize teachers; cities are becoming lager; the Olympic games; TV and children; vegetarian diet or eating meat; honest and white lies; taking a gap year; capital punishment; job-hopping; censorship of the internet; the disappearance of language and culture; marijuana; government subsidize artists and musicians.

這裏給大家羅列了常見的話題,大家做好充分的準備是非常有必要的,可以每個話題通過同意和反對或者現象解釋解決等角度總結常見的詞彙和表達。

當然準備一些通用性的觀點也是非常有必要的,比如各位考生在考試沒有太充分準備的觀點是可以從如下幾個方面加以考慮的:經濟、時間、健康、方便、心理、感情、權利、環境、文化和道德。

提出觀點後剩下的是需要論證觀點了,要掌握常見的論證手段:比如數據說明、實驗結果、引用權威、逸聞趣事、實際事例、調查採訪等等。這些段落也需要模塊化,事先做好充分的準備,考試的時候可以直接使用模塊,替換內容即可。下面以引用權威的名人名言爲例給大家做一個簡單介紹:

To illustrate it profoundly and comprehensively, I would like to cite what one of my favorite writers Francis Bacon ever mentioned: Histories make men wise; poems witty; the mathematics subtle; natural philosophy deep; moral grave; logic and rhetoric able to contend. We can easily build up an accurate picture of implications behind his/her words.

考試可以按照需要替換內容,從而達到模塊化過程。其他的例子限於篇幅不一一展開,這裏主要呈現一個基本思路。

雅思寫作步驟之三:語言改錯

很多中國考生雅思寫作得到較低分數,其中一個很重要的原因就是裏面犯了大量的語法錯誤,這裏講給大家列出一個check list,希望同學們在練習完自己的文章以後針對這幾個方面給自己做改錯練習,長期訓練將有效提高各位考生的寫作質量:

名詞:名詞的可數單數一定不能單獨存在。注意單複數等基本問題。

動詞:時刻注意“與時俱進”,任何時候用動詞都要想清楚時態的使用。被動的結構不要出錯,虛擬語氣的動詞使用也要格外注意,不要出錯。

句子結構方面:一定要注意句子結構完整性,不要出現run-on句子,一個句子只能有一個動詞,每加一個動詞就要加一個連詞,注意關係代詞和副詞的正確使用。非謂語動詞使用時注意主被動關係。

修飾關係:動詞和形容詞一定要用副詞修飾,這個至關重要,很多考生犯錯誤。

其他的小語法方面:主謂一致,序數詞和計數詞,代詞和介詞的使用正確性。

雅思寫作步驟之四:語言包裝

語言包裝能夠讓語言生色不少,所以考前準備常見的語言包裝技巧也相當重要。有很多方面都能提升自己的語言質量:比如長句擴充,短句融合,長短句結合,詞彙多樣性;強調句,倒裝句,分詞結構和插入語都是非常出色的語言,可以大大增加文章的可讀性,也能夠滿足雅思寫作的高分標準,即詞彙的多樣性和語法結構的多樣性。

詞彙多樣性即準備常見的雅思寫作中高頻使用的表達法,比如重要、比較、破壞、進展、吸引等表達法。句型多樣性上面也給大家舉了一些例子,下面以分詞爲例,給大家做一個簡單介紹如何準備語言包裝技能。

假設考試會寫兩個很簡單的主謂賓的句子,通過分詞結構可以融合成一個長句,這個過程也是可以模塊化的:A do1. A do2. 我們可以表達成doing1, A do2. 這樣一個本來很短的兩個句子融合在一起了,而且使用了複雜的分詞句型,表達更具有可讀性。例如I get up in the morning. I go to school happily. 可以轉化成: getting up in the morning, I go to school happily. 如果要想再升一級,可以把分詞作爲插入語,即變成A, doing1, do2.更加增強語言質量。

雅思寫作觀點如何找:權利自由原則

動物:

It is a breach of their natural rights to take them by force into captivity for our own purposes.

Animals have the right to be treated as beings of value in themselves, not as the means to human ends.

死刑:

The right to life is inviolable and protected by law.

One human right is the right to life and taking a life away by execution is cruel, inhumane and degrading.

極限運動:

People should be free to participate in activities with others as long as it does not affect the safety of non-participants.

攝像機:

They feel that being watched constantly is like being in a jail, and that ordinary people are losing their freedom because of these devices.

強迫老年人退休:

Compulsorily retiring old employees can affect the older individual’s freedom - and right - to work and can deprive society of valuable experience and insights.

禁酒:

Banning alcohol infringes people’s civil liberties to an unacceptable degree.

禁菸:

While a government has a responsibility to protect its population, it also has a responsibility to defend their freedom of choice.

新聞審查:

Banning advertisements is a severe restriction upon freedom of speech.

We have accepted that freedom of expression should have limits.

The risks of stifling free expression far outweigh the potential for unacceptable material.

An individual's rights end when they impinge on the safety and rights of others.

媒體報道名人:

Famous people deserve privacy and respect.

Although, generally speaking, the media should not interfere in people’s private lives, there are times when it is correct to do so.

母親在家帶孩子:

Mothers should have as much freedom as anyone else in society to decide what is best for them and their children.

家庭教育:

If they feel that the child would be best educated at home, by them or by another, that is their right.

控制人口:

They feel that this is one area of life where they have the right to make decisions for themselves.

分開教育:

Among these opponents are “equal education” advocates, who argue that every student has the same right to enjoying high quality education regardless of gender, race, wealth, and most importantly, regardless of their minor differences in intellectual abilities.

資助藝術:

So-called "elite culture" should be available for all to enjoy, and not just confined to the rich.

雅思寫作觀點如何找:文化原則

1)文化重要性

捕鯨:

Whale hunting is an important aspect of some people’s cultural heritage.

建築:

Architecture is part of a country’s cultural heritage.

語言:

Language is a type of cultural heritage.

Language is often seen as a badge of identity and more conflict may be created if the global community is seen to prefer one language to another.

電視:

Television is mostly directed to films and shows that have commercial purposes but little cultural value.

旅遊:

It is not purely ecosystems which are damaged by the pressure of consumption (e.g. by sewage output or pressure on water resources), but also ancient monuments or heritage sites.

2)文化多元性

電視:

It changes our society for the worse, making us all conform to a bland, "Hollywood" model of entertainment in which regional traditions and diversity are lost.

語言:

The diversity of languages is endlessly fascinating.

政府資助藝術:

Subsidised companies can afford to take more risks and to experiment, enabling new styles and forms of art to emerge and to become popular.

旅遊:

Tourism demands that an area conform to a certain stereotyped image, requiring the local inhabitants to make a caricature of their own culture.

寄宿學校:(多樣性)

Spending all your time in school restricts the circle of people you come into contact with.

Interaction with other pupils is a crucial element of a child’s development

體育:

PE is an aspect of school being about more than just book learning – it is about educating the whole person, a holistic education that betters us in an all-round sense, rather than a merely academic experience.

雅思寫作觀點如何找:道義原則

捕鯨:

Killing whales for human use is morally wrong.

Modern whaling is humane, especially compared to the factory farming of animals like chickens, cow and pigs, (themselves a relatively intelligent and social species).

捕獵:

Traditional hunting methods are often particularly cruel.

Overall, however, the essential point is that it is morally wrong to kill animals for pleasure and no amount of economic benefits can make that right.

動物試驗:

We need to make sure that the millions of animals who are used for testing new products are treated with the minimum of suffering. Although some animal testing may be unavoidable at present, treating our fellow creatures as mercifully as possible will demonstrate our humanity.

Those against the use of animal testing claim that it is inhumane to use animals in experiments. I disagree completely. It would be much more inhumane to test new drugs on children or adults.

治療還是教育:

Obviously, there is a strong human argument for catching any medical condition as early as possible.

雅思寫作觀點如何找:教育原則

電視:

Many scientific and cultural programs are shown on television, which give new educational opportunities for our society.

動物園:

Zoos nowadays are not marketed as places of entertainment - they are places of education.

博物館免費:

Free and cheap access to the arts is crucial for education.

死刑:

By executing criminals you are ruling out the possibility of rehabilitation.

Some criminals are beyond rehabilitation;

怎樣控制人口:

This could be done by a process of education that points out the way a small family can mean an improved quality of life for the family members, as well as less strain on the country’s, perhaps very limited, resources.

童工:

If learning responsibilities and work experience are considered to be important, then children can acquire these by having light, part-time jobs or even doing tasks such as helping their parents around the family home, which are unpaid, but undoubtedly of value in children’s development.

課外活動:

If they cannot play make-believe games, how can they develop their imagination? How can they learn physical co-ordination or learn important social lessons about winning and losing if they do not practice any sports?

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